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The artwork I’m going to introduce is The White Nenuphars painted by Claude Monet. Monet, the artist of this painting, is French and also a famous Impressionist painter. This artwork was created in 1899 and used oil paint. He painted a pond full of nenuphars and wooden bridge on the pond. In addition, he painted 18 series, including(현재분사) this painting. This painting is from an animation Little Einstein that I enjoyed watching when I was young. In that animation, a cute music pet which called Melody stepped on the nenuphars and jumped with a music called Humoresque. When I look at this painting, I reminisce that I have watched that animation fun. Furthermore, a beautiful nenuphars and soft colors make me comfortable.(동사 make 5형식 문장) I really like to look (to부정사 명사적용법) at this painting. 영작 너무 오랜만이라 어떻게 하는지 다 잊어버린 듯... 이거 맞나...???? 내가 쓴 거 중에 틀린 거 있으면 고쳐줘도 고맙고!! 제발 도와조...